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大虾能不能邦我改一下这些句子,据说问题很多,谢谢

大虾能不能邦我改一下这些句子,据说问题很多,谢谢

现在迫切需要制定有关安乐死的法律。大多数国家禁止安乐死,在这些国家医生只能偷偷地的病人实施安乐死。但是,也有的国家公开实施安乐死,例如荷兰。越来越多的国家目前正在就安乐死合法性展开辩论。
当一个病人长期遭受疾病的折磨而又无治愈的希望时,为什么要让他继续痛苦下去呢为什么不能用安乐死来结束他的痛苦。
但是如果安乐死合法化,也存在一种危险--有人会利用安乐死进行谋杀。总之安乐死是一个不能回避的问题。
It is urgent to make a law on euthanasia. It is forbidden to practice mercy killing in most countries where the doctors can only practise euthanasia in private. But euthanasia is practiced in some countries, such as Holland. More and more countries are starting a debate on the legislation to euthanasia.
When a patient suffers ordeal from disease without curing hope for a long time, why make him continue to suffer and why not to end his suffering by mercy killing? But if euthanasia is legalized, it also poses a danger—someone will practise killing on purpose with euthanasia. In short, euthanasia is an issue can not be dodged.

美国妇女对美国的发展作出了重要的贡献,但他们却一车受到各种形式的性别歧视。政治上他们做的是那些乏味却又决定胜败的琐碎事,很少有机会升到高层职位,得到好处的是男人。经济上大部分妇女做的是那些工资低,又没有前途的工作,他们的工资也由远低于做同样工作的男人。很多美国人不承认这歧视妇女,说这只是社会分工的不同。很多妇女甚至也满足于自己作为次等公民的角色。所以作者说妇女要获得真正的平等,将是一场长期而艰巨的斗争。
American women have made important contribution to American development, but they are always suffering various  sexual discrimination. Politically they do the tedious but make the difference between victory and defeat on election day, rarely can be promoted, it is man who reward the reap. Economically, most woman do the low paying, dead end job, are paid far less than man for the same job. Most Americans do not admit this is prejudice and say this only is social labor division. Most women even are contented with the role as second class citizen. Therefore the author says it is a long-term and arduous struggle before women achieve really equality.
当我得知喜鹊获得了加利福尼亚州一所大学的奖学金,可以到大学艺术学院去学习的时候,我为她感到十分高兴。我知道他一直想成为一名诗人,我也知道他很有才能。对他来说,这个机会太好了。因此我会回到ya xi,要把好消息告诉他,让他填一些表格。我在他家里没有找到他。他的妻子说他们已经分居了,只听说她在钱柏林。于是我又觉得sailingna,让她帮我找了喜鹊。在那说喜鹊在被捕入狱后有了很大的变化,她认为他对上白人的大学已经不感兴趣了。我说喜鹊应该知道这个消息有他自己决定是否去上大学。他同意了,带我去找他的好朋友埃尔西,当我终于去要见到喜鹊时,他已被警察开枪打死了。
I was delighted for him when I know Magpie was rewarded the scholarship from a university in California to study in art college. I knew he always want to be a poet, and I also knew he is a talent. It was a great opportunity for him. Therefore I returned to crook to tell him the great new and fill some papers. I did not find him at his home. His wife said they were separated and just knew he is in Chamberline. And then I went to find Sallina asked her help me to look for Magpie. Salingna said Magpie had gone after being captured in prison, she thought that he no longer had interest to go to university for whites. I said Magpie should know this new and decide whether to go to university. He consented and took me to find his friend Elsie, when I eventually to visit Magpie, he was shot by police
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现在迫切需要制定有关安乐死的法律.大多数国家禁止安乐死.在这些国家医生只能偷偷地给病人实施安乐死.但是,也有的国家公开实施安乐死,例如荷兰.越来越多的国家目前正在就安乐死的合法性展开辩论.

当一个病人长期遭受疾病的折磨而又无治愈的希望时, 为什么要让他继续痛苦下去呢?为什么不能用安乐死来结束他的痛苦?

但是,如果安乐死合法化,也存在一种危险------有人会利用安乐死进行谋杀.总之,安乐死是一个不能回避的问题.

The need for laws on euthanasia can’t be dodged for much longer . Euthanasia is a taboo in most countries . In these countries doctors can only practise it secretly . But it is openly practiced in some countries , such as Holland . Right now more and more countries are going over the arguments about legalizing euthanasia .

When a patient suffers from illness for a long time and there is no hope of curing it , why do we let him prolong the throes ?Why can’t we practise euthanasia to stop the throes ?

But if we legalize euthanasia , there will be a danger Someone may use it for killing . All in all , euthanasia is question we can’t dodge
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美国妇女对美国的发展做出了重要贡献, 但她们却一直受到各种形式的性别歧视.政治上,她们做的是那些乏味却又决定决定选举胜败的琐碎事, 很少有机会升到高层职位, 得到好处的是男人. 经济上, 大部分妇女做的是那些工资低和没有前途的工作, 她们的工资也永远低于做同样工作的男人. 很多美国人不承认这是歧视妇女,说这只是 社会分工的不同.很多妇女甚至也满足于自己作为次等公民的角色. 所以作者说, 妇女要获得真正的平等将是一场长期而艰巨的斗争.

The American women made great contributions to the nation’s development , but they received different forms of prejudices because of their sex .
In politics , they did all the tedious details that made the differene between victory and defeat on election day and seldom had the chance to reach a better position , while the men reaped收割 the rewards .
In economy , most women did the lower-paying and dead –end jobs and they were paid less than the men for the same job
Many American people didn’t admit it was prejudice against women . They said it was only a different division of labour in society . Even many women were content with their roles as second-class citizens . So the author said it was a long painful struggle for the women to get real equality .
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当我得知喜鹊获得了加利福尼亚州一所大学的奖学金,可以到大学艺术学院去学习的时候,我为她感到十分高兴。我知道他一直想成为一名诗人,我也知道他很有才能。对他来说,这个机会太好了。因此我会回到ya xi,要把好消息告诉他,让他填一些表格。我在他家里没有找到他。他的妻子说他们已经分居了,只听说她在钱柏林。于是我又觉得sailingna,让她帮我找了喜鹊。在那说喜鹊在被捕入狱后有了很大的变化,她认为他对上白人的大学已经不感兴趣了。我说喜鹊应该知道这个消息有他自己决定是否去上大学。他同意了,带我去找他的好朋友埃尔西,当我终于去要见到喜鹊时,他已被警察开枪打死了。

When I knew Magpie got a scholarship of a California University and could go to the Fine Arts School to study , I was very pleased for him . I knew he wanted to become a poet all the time. I also knew he had a good talent . It was a very good chance for him . So I went back to Crow Creek to tell him about the good news and let him fill out some papers . But I didn’t find him at his home . His wife said they had not been together for a while and only heard he was in Chamberlain . Then I went for Salina and asked her to help me find Magpie . Salina said Magpie had changed a lot since he was taken into prison . She thought he was not interested in going to the university of white people . But I said Magpie had a right to know this news and make the decision whether to go or not by himself . She agreed and took me to his good friend , Elgie . But when I could really see Magpie at last , he had been shot by the police .

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politically, economically,in many ways ,
some sentences is far from concise.
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thanks

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so that.
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