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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Utilitarian Courses or Elementary Courses. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1、有人认为大学里实用课程重要
2、有人认为基础课程最重要
3、我的看法
Utilitarian Courses or Elementary Courses
In university courses,somebody think the utilitarian courses are importance. Because utilitarian courses could tell us how to solve the professional problems.However,somebody think elementary courses are more importance.
In my opinion,both are improtance.If you have no fundation, you will have no idea to study elemetary courses.If you have a good fundation, but you don't study elemetary, you will slove the professional problems badly.
in a word,utilitarian courses and elemetary courses are improtance.No one better than the other.