FIGHTOUT 请原谅，没有办法才说挑战你的，你是这边的牛人，帮忙找找错误的地方啊。
班主任让我写一篇感想，傻眼了，还是用英语写的，我的英语很烂，能不能帮忙指正一下，最后一句在WORD中老是提示语法错误。
Experiences on the oral English course
“Hey, You guy, come here! Please write an article about the experience on the oral English course in English.” said my coordinator.
“Oh, no. I’m very sorry. I can’t accomplish this difficult task.” I replied.
“Young boy, you’ve so much spare time. Time is money. You can’t waste money, waste is an evil.” She retorted.
Hearing the phrases “so much spare time”, I have no excuse to decline my appreciated coordinator’s request. Indeed, I have so much spare time. Conventionally, I have four courses every term.
Thanking to school’s kindness, I get the qualification to participate two courses plus two courses
by(去掉？) self-taught. Even though there is a course conducting in our school. To my great delight, really, I’ve got opportunity to communicate with foreign teachers to strengthen my oral English, which is
as terrible as writing English and reading English. Only once I
saw my foreign English teachers so far. (Three weeks
have(去掉？) elapsed since I met them.)
Yet, they impressed me sharply
not because of the accent or tone of pronunciation but that the manner of treating students who are late
but wanted to enter the classroom. They warmly and sincerely welcomed us. They didn’t close the door and leave us outside. Otherwise
they must be stupid. It was foolproof that class must open to students
like our country opening to
world of the outside. Who
wanting to close the door must be crazy or foolish. In fact, the action of the teachers
promoted our enthusiasm. We dipped into the atmosphere.
Moreover, teachers could slow their speed in order to ensure everybody present could understand what they said. In other words, they are highly responsible. They managed to satisfy students’ demands. They knew their obligation was to help us master the foreign language in speed and quality. They didn’t consider Increasing of Economic Incomes as the sole pursuit. How kind they are, what a good luck we have.
That’s all outlined above,which I experienced about the course. It’s time to acknowledge people as follows:
Thanks very much to our school once again. They made me
set spare time aside to complete this article. Greatest honor to you!
Then, thanks very much for reading my article. I know there must be a lot of mistakes in spelling or in grammar! It’s inevitable because I am weak in English. I hope you’re a generous man
so that I can seek some comfort from it. Writing down this article is just because of ocean of spare time I own. God bless you!
May you accomplish all courses you are required and get the graduate certificate in 2、4 years or more!
Merry Christmas.
老大 红色是我修改的不知道对不对，兰色的无从下手 呵呵 能进一步提点吗？
